Day at Movie World

Today we were learning about how to hook in the reader.
I enjoyed writing about my Australia memories.
I found it challenging to use adjectives.
My learning object shows that I can use juicy verbs. 
Next time I would try not to use said to many times.

Day at Movie World

As I jumped off the roller coaster my hair was all frizzed up. When I looked to the right I saw fast rides zooming past me. Then when I looked to the left I saw a shaved ice stand.I begged my mum to bye me and my brother one  and she said “only if you clean your room”. I said back to  her  “ I promise “ . When we  walked to the shaved ice stand we saw my favourite Villain Harley  Quinn .’Hmm I never thought that Harley Quinn would be here but we were in Movie World in Australia so I’m going to get a photo with her. Looking at my mum with my puppy eyes she asked me what I was planning and what did I want. I said to her “can I please pretty please  take a photo with Harley Quinn ? “  she looked at me with an annoyed face. She said to me “ fine but we gotta go quick so that we don't lose a spot in line “. Then when I heard that I grabbed her wrist violently we zoomed past people , bumping and accidentally shoving them we made it when we got the photo we went zooming back though the crowd and got our spot back . The shaved ice was so divine that I wanted a second one  I wish could go back to Australia again.