Wednesday, 13 May 2020

Mystery story.

Today for writing we had to write a mystery story.
I enjoyed writing my own part of the explorer.
I found it challenging to come up with a new scenario.
My digital learning object shows that I can re- imagine stories.
Next time I would do one of the scenarios that were already on the sheet.



2 comments:

  1. Aloha Morgan,
    I liked how your writing is very detailed and based on a story our class knows.
    Did you think about how smart you were to screenshot the doc? Even I couldn't figure that out..
    Maybe next time probably make the writing a little bigger?
    mā te wā
    Manvi

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  2. Hyvää päivää Morgan,
    I think you were very creative writing your own scenario and basing it on a book Room 1 has been reading. You even made sure the characters sounded the same and did similar things e.g. Lila being protective, and Max's snot being a clue.
    You should be proud of this wonderful piece of writing.
    Mā te wā,
    Mrs Naden

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