Today for writing we had to write a mystery story.
I enjoyed writing my own part of the explorer.
I found it challenging to come up with a new scenario.
My digital learning object shows that I can re- imagine stories.
Next time I would do one of the scenarios that were already on the sheet.



Aloha Morgan,
ReplyDeleteI liked how your writing is very detailed and based on a story our class knows.
Did you think about how smart you were to screenshot the doc? Even I couldn't figure that out..
Maybe next time probably make the writing a little bigger?
mā te wā
Manvi
Hyvää päivää Morgan,
ReplyDeleteI think you were very creative writing your own scenario and basing it on a book Room 1 has been reading. You even made sure the characters sounded the same and did similar things e.g. Lila being protective, and Max's snot being a clue.
You should be proud of this wonderful piece of writing.
Mā te wā,
Mrs Naden