I enjoyed telling what I did at the beach.
I found it challenging to use different sentence starters.
My digital learning object shows that I can use juicy verbs.
Next time I would challenge myself to use a long sentence followed bye short ones.
Friday, 22 May 2020
Afternoon at the beach
Today we were learning to describe.
I enjoyed telling what I did at the beach.
I found it challenging to use different sentence starters.
My digital learning object shows that I can use juicy verbs.
Next time I would challenge myself to use a long sentence followed bye short ones.
I enjoyed telling what I did at the beach.
I found it challenging to use different sentence starters.
My digital learning object shows that I can use juicy verbs.
Next time I would challenge myself to use a long sentence followed bye short ones.
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Kia ora. I am Manvi from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you used juicy verbs and even though the story is short it's worth a read!
Did you think about maybe writing about a car ride home or any other event you did?
Next time you could write about another event or a car ride home.
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Mā te wā
Manvi
Kia ora. I am Francesca from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you described what you did at the beach.
Even though it is a short story it is worth the read.
Maybe you could tell as what beach you went to.
Please visit my blog
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Francesca
Kia ora Morgan-Marie,
ReplyDeleteI like your story about your time at the beach. Juicy verbs make reading interesting. Thank you for sharing your blog with us.
Nga mihi nui
Mrs Tamatea